I’m looking for people, both adults and kids, who would be interested in being a test market for the first five chapters of “Jak and the Scarlet Thread.” The intended audience is the Chronicles of Narnia/Harry Potter crowd. Send me your email via email@example.com or reply below with your email and I’ll send you the file. Tks!
Here’s a teaser:
jjjjjJak had no idea that three words could hurt so much.
jjjjjA moment before, he had been leaning against the orange couch in the basement, but as soon as the words were out of his mouth, the musty smell of the concrete blocks whooshed away and the walls disappeared.
jjjjjHe now lay flat on his back, his right heel throbbing, surrounded by a swirling mist and a troop of long-armed trees. His eyes darted back and forth from one black trunk to the next, and panic began to rise in his throat. What had happened to the basement? Where was he now? And why did his foot hurt so much?